Feel&Space

I light a candle
Blindly feel around the room
Empty space reflects
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Feel the loneliness
Dark space to eternity
Winter is here to stay

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RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #129
Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge#129

Author: pranabaxom

Poetry is my passion. I am not a methodical writer. I have no set topics to write about. What I feel, perceive, think about, I will like to share in this blog. I open my mind to the world. Like the weather, sometimes my poems are cloudy, sometimes stormy. I always like to see sunshine streaming through the leaves of trees, so I hope I can share some of those sunshine with my readers. View all posts by pranabaxom

2 thoughts on “Feel&Space”

Gayl says:

December 29, 2016 at 9:35 am

Your word choices really paint a picture and I could imagine the feelings it conveys. Beautiful haiku!

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1. pranabaxom says:
  
  December 29, 2016 at 11:32 am
  
  Thanks for the kind words and thanks for visiting. Glad that you liked the haiku.
  
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