[I wrote this poem over a span of one month. As the poem is long , I shall post it in parts every Friday. It’s a poem about love but some may find the content semi-erotic. Lest their finer senses be disturbed, be aware and proceed at your own risk.]
Memories from a day in life many decades ago comes flooding back when the love of his life suddenly appears after a prolonged absence.
Link to the previous part :https://https://wp.me/p73yZZ-4m6
Part III
Tried as much as we wished
to hold on to the moment and
stay in that eternal embrace,
Our racing hearts had
lost all controls and
a wild warmth was spreading fast.
With a sigh
she let go of me and
hid her face in her palms,
She turned her face away,
Turned her back to me and
lay face down on the meadows.
A streak of ray through the leaves,
Lighted her back in an ethereal glow,
Cascading dark hairs down her spine,
To the bottom of the
sensuous rise of her hips,
Contrasting the silky smooth
skin on her back,
Glowing in the afternoon sun;
She lay there
as if in a trance,
barely moving.
Her bare back
a canvas for me to paint,
My fingers as a brush
I gingerly proceeded,
Parting her hair tenderly,
I touched the nape of her neck,
An audible gasp escaped her lips,
She shuddered and tensed,
then relaxed;
And she smiled.[20]
As my fingers played
music down her spine,
Gently touching and
probing down the center line,
She tensed and
relaxed in a rhythm,
I could feel her muscles
through her smooth skin,
dancing to my tune,
And slowly I moved down.
Her back narrowed
from her shoulder to her waist,
And then spread wide
to encompass the voluptuous rise,
I sauntered at the slight dip
where her spine met
the narrow, deep gorge
parting her hips;
Fearful of where that
dark deep gorge lead,
I ventured no more.
As she hesitated
and hold her breath
and lay motionless,
I gazed away
from the temptation.[21]
[December 4, 2020]
© Pranabendra Sarma, 2021
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Love the feeling of suspense. What will she feel next?
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Posted stanzas 22 and 23 (Part III) of From Vault of Memories Past today.
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You’ve changed from the intimate ‘you’ to a more distant ‘she’. Is that intentional? I think you always ‘saunter’ on foot, as in walking or strolling. Not sure a hand can saunter.
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Was it intentional nine months back when I wrote or was it the mood I was in on that particular day when I wrote it? Frankly Jane, at this moment I can’t say. Thanks for pointing it out. You have keen eyes.
“Saunter” was intentional (fingers as thy feet maybe😀).
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I read. What sticks out for me won’t be the same for everybody, but as long as it helps 🙂
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It will help.
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Good 🙂
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That is some ballad you wrote. Kudos. Will read the entire thing again in leisure
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😀😀. Thanks. One third done.
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Wow. An epic 😊
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😀😀😀
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😊😊
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